Proofreading the Dentistry Personal Statement that you have written is something you must not ignore and also think of editing whenever possible. You could also take professional help in writing an effective personal statement or send your written sample to a professional to modify it or edit it. As this written piece decides your entry into your dream medical school, it would be better if you take it seriously, and if you are not confident, then take professional help. 

Dentistry Personal Statement, FOUNDATION PROGRAMME SJT, Medical School Interview Course